I'm liking the concept a lot. By creating these things it helps you to put yourself into "real world" situations for designing. I think the color choice and composition is nice, though I would like to see a little more variation in your type and the stars possibly. Good work keep it up
So simple, yet sooo damn sexy. Well done. I dig the colors. If this were a real poster or flyer for a fashion show, then yeah maybe Five Star Fashion Show should be a bit bigger. This looks like a fashion show that will be held a club. I don't know if you were going for that but I honestly really dig the compostion and colors. Nice crisp clean style.
I like how you put the important word in pink for contrast and to bring attention to them. I also don't think the text is too small. You can read the important stuff, and what you have to walk right up to and read, isn't as consequential.
The pink is far too vivid, there's such a stark contrast between the cool calming blue and the fluroescent pink. The colours just do not work together in my opinon. There's no real cohesion either between what the image is portraying and what a fashion show is about, when I look at it I don't immediately think "fashion show" or even anything particularly about fashion. If the text wasn't there and someone asked me what this poster was about, I would probably say it's for a rave or nightclub of some kind.
The image is great, but as a poster its quite difficult to read. The text needs to be more streamlined, it looks like your trying to say too much at the top. What i mean is that there needs to be a clear hierarchy.